Reference
number: 1414
Karin Steiger (HRCS 85) Campus Recruiting Singapore Tel. +65 6433 3137
Dear Mr. Steiger,
Karin Steiger (HRCS 85) Campus Recruiting Singapore Tel. +65 6433 3137
Dear Mr. Steiger,
15th
Sept. ‘12
I am a second year undergraduate student at The National
University of Singapore (NUS), majoring in Computer Engineering. Your advertisement on
the online portal prompted me to contact you about internship opportunities in the Information Technology division at Credit Suisse. This
program at your company is very appealing and I am particularly keen on interning as a Technology Analyst
in the period from May-Nov.
My proficiency in computer languages like C, C++, and Java meet the job requirements and provide me with a good base to quickly understand and adapt to the systems specific to Credit Suisse. I believe my ability to analyze and learn quickly would enable me to add value to the position.
In addition
to the skills I've obtained from
my education, my experience as a technical
services intern last summer has provided me with an excellent background
in the practical aspects of computer engineering. If given the chance, I would
love to work and improve on my skills further.
During
these two years at NUS, I have taken on many additional responsibilities. As
you will see in my attached
resume, I’m engaged in various extra curricular activities. I am the Director
of Special Program Department, Electrical and Computer Engineering Club and
part of the SoC Leadership Program. These leadership roles, have boosted my
organizational, communicational and interpersonal
skills.
My ability
to think outside the box and passion for my subject of Computer Engineering
would allow me to contribute to Credit Suisse. I hope that you will consider my
enclosed résumé, which provides full details of my qualification. Thank you for
your consideration. I look forward to speaking with you.
Sincerely,
Shweta Sharma
email: shweta*******
HP: 9030****
Hi Shweta,
ReplyDeleteWe are Johanna, Jae, and Wei Song. We have read your cover letter and felt impressed because it provides a good outline of experiences and technical skills, which are suitable for the respective job.
Hope you can get this position! :)
Hi Ramon,
DeleteThanks for your feedback!
Hey Shweta,
ReplyDeleteYour cover letter was quite good. However, you could improve a bit by elaborating on your inter personal skills. But I think you should include a heading stating the position for which you are applying. Other than that, great job!
Hey Hasan,
DeleteThanks for pointing out the areas of improvement, will add the relevant details to the letter!
Thanks!